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Paul Fredton
Topic Started: Jan 29 2017, 02:33 PM (659 Views)
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Name: Paul Fredton (AKA the Crusader)
Gender: Male
Age: 31 actually, but physically 16

Height: 6 foot 1 / 185cm
Weight: 11 stone / 70kg
Appearance:
Lanky in appearance, with an unassuming air about him. However, if you look into his eyes you will see he is actually driven. He is caucasion, with short brown hair. His posture seems to be a mix of stiff and on guard, yet, relaxed. In a way it is the posture of someone used to being on guard at all the time, and is so normal to them that it natural

Occupation: Student
Year: 2
Class: C
Club: Senki Academy Historical Society

Residency: Bara

Personality:
Driven. Paul believes he does good by ridding the world of monsters, Demons and those who would follow them. He believes he serves an Ancient God of Good, Justice and Protection. He also does not question those who he believes to side with Good too much. This makes him easily decieved by those who know the right buttons to push. The one who knows the most about this is Yuntak, the alledged God he serves.
He places great importance in how people appear to judge them as either Good or Evil. He will also be willing to kill anyone who tries to protect his targets if given no other choice. Thanks to Yuntak, he believes he has no other choice a lot!

Unlike most such obsessed people, Paul can understand the importance of infiltration and gathering information. Using his young appearance, he likes to learn more about who he will target, and how best to target them.

He is also very intelligent when it comes to technology, having created for himself a highly sophisticated and deadly power suite using materials stolen from some early kills of his.
He deems Fran Kelly (Shade) to be a risk because she managed to escape with an artifact the heroes of his world recovered, and permenatly crippled 3 of them during her escape, and cause another's death.
Actually, he was manipulated by Yuntak into agreeing to going after her

History:
Growing up Paul loved stories of Heroes fighting all kinds of monsters. The heroes were always great looking, and the villains and monsters were always hideous. The Heroes could do no wrong, while their foes were either pure evil, or misguided people who would join the heroes when they were shown how they were being tricked by the villains.
Like most kids, he did not realize it was just stories, because the characters were based on real super powered people and were used to get public backing for those who claimed to be on the side of Good, regardless of their real action.
Living in a remote area, they did not see supers much, nor heard rumors about their less savory acts. Just what was in the media, which was controlled by payments and threats of lawsuits for defamation, slander and other things.

When he was 16, he saw a fight between 2 Supers. One looked like a wrinkled old man, but could command plants and were using them to fight the other. He also was changing a bit, growing bark like skin, and other things. Paul recognized him as a hermit who lived on the edge of the town and didn't like anyone around his place! The other was someone he recognized from the media as a Hero called the Paladin who was known to hunt down and kill monsters who could disguise themselves as Humans to corrupt areas and cause the most evil!
Well, that's what the media said, and Paul believed.

The unthinkable happened, and the old hermit managed to get the better of the Paladin and have vines starting to grow into his skin, while others were strangling him.

Paul did the only thing he could think of and tried to save the Paladin, by hitting the old man over the head from behind with a rock. That knocked the old guy out.
Paul went to the Paladin and tried to save him, but it was too late. The Hero was too injured. Before the Paladin died, he passed onto Paul an amulet he was wearing.
Paul put it on and heard a voice in his head:
"In trying to save his life by attacking a Monster who could have taken you down, you have shown your valor, and thinking of his life above your own, you have shown great kindness. The Forces of Good can use a warrior like you to stand against the tides of Evil in the world! I ask of you if you will join me, Yuntak, in this battle as my champion for the sake of the Souls of innocents yet to come?"
Paul could not believe and answered the only way someone brainwashed like him could "Yes!"
Paul could feel power flowing into him from the amulet.
The Paladin's body disintigrated, and Paul took the costume.

As he was about to leave Yuntak told him that the old man was only knocked out, and unless paul finished the job, he would come back and seek revenge on Paul's family. Paul killed him, and felt power flowing into the amulet. He also saw a strange light going from the body to the amulet.
Yuntak told him "The power and Souls of the innocent that he managed to steal over time."

In time Paul would become the Crusader, and using tech and materials stolen from his kills, created a power armor that bestowed a lot of power to him, while just looking like old fashioned armor.

Truth about Yuntak


Yuntak and those he considered Heroes convinced him to come to this world following Shade, both to protect this world from her, and bestow justice on her. Actually, they wanted him gone from there for different reasons.

Not all of his power suite made it through to this reality



Powers and Abilities:
Blessings of Yuntak:


Broken Power Armor:

Equipment:
Yuntak's amulet
Power Armor
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Edited by Corruption, Feb 6 2018, 02:29 PM.
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Thank you for the profile, I will be reviewing it.

The history is acceptable, though power-wise it seems to be rather vague. Firstly "Blessing of Yuntak" encompasses quite a few buffs for a single power. From what I can tell (which by the way, please re-write it so it's clearer even if I'm right), it gives him 1.5 times peak human strength, speed, endurance, and recovery, along with mental protection that seems to encompass all kinds of mental manipulation. While the buffs aren't too much, nothing overwhelmingly superhuman, combined it becomes too much for a single power, especially considering you have two other powers (more on those later). The selectiveness of Yuntak's mental protection, which I assume is meant to be a drawback, doesn't count as much of a weakness either, considering you're also in control of Yuntak.

As for the power armor, the fact that it is made out of materials from another reality with different laws of physics and magic implies there may be some innate abilities due to the material or some other features in addition to whatever protection it offers. Please indicate what kind of protection it offers, and clarify whether or not it has any other features aside from the Fists of Lightning and Silent movement. While we're on the subject, please also clarify the Fists of Lightning. How powerful of a shock can he deliver? Does the stored power aid his armour in some way?
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Edited.
Added those details and clarified others. Even removed a few aspects of powers.
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Thank you for the changes, it looks better now. However, please indicate which stats the blessing improves, unless you mean all aspects of you humans, in which case please indicate so as well.
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Edited.
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Since the blessing buffs all aspects of his body, which includes speed, strength, endurance, recovery, senses, and potentially others that I can't think of at the moment, please limit it to one or two uses per thread to balance it out. Thank you.
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Done, and added a cooling down period between uses
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Jan 29 2017, 02:33 PM
Powers and Abilities:
Blessings of Yuntak:
As Champion of Yuntak, he received some boosts. However, most need time to be regained in this reality.
His body can be boosted as a whole to be 1.5 peak human levels for short periods of time (5 posts). Due to Yuntak's limited power in that reality, Paul can only use this 2 times per thread, with a 10 period between when the first use finishes and when he can use the power again.
He also possesses an aura that seems Holy to those that can detect such things.

Broken Power Armor:
When Paul was transported, he was wearing his costume. However, not all of it came with him. This is due to numerous reasons, including some of the materials used not being able to exist in this reality. Also, the laws of physics and magic here are different enough that he will have to research them before trying to make repairs to the Armor.

The armor is actually light weight and does not hinder movement. Due to it's design, it can still work as armor (full body chainmail)
It has numerous inoperable systems in it and a few operational ones.
As part of the systems, he can store electricity in small powerful batteries hidden in his armor. However, only one system that uses them actually works right now.
Currently the armor can do the following:

Fists of Lightning:
The gauntlets allows him to conduct electricity via his hands. This includes via the palms, as if he was gripping something, or the backs as if he is punching something. It produces a voltage strong enough to stun people. He is trying to get it up to it's old level where it could do much more.

Silent movement:
Despite the fact he is wearing what looks like medieval armor, his can somehow be hard for people to hear. This is due to the his armor having sound nullifying material in the boots. In time he might be able to get the parts to cover his appearance working

Equipment:
Yuntak's amulet
Power Armor
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2018 yearly upgrade

Free Wifi connection and web surfing
He has managed to repair part of his armour, and it allows him to access wifi, radio and other brodcast transmissions. Decoding them was difficult, but he found the protocals needed online. Encrypted transmissions are not access able to him yet.
The armour's systems allow him to enter a VR setting, and he can enter the net like this. (VR system has lost all previous settings)
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Just a quick question about the VR setting thing: What do you mean by it? Is it just the net, kinda like that futurama episode where they had digital avatars in a digital world? Or does it include other stuff? If so, what are the VR settings you had in mind?
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I never saw that episode of Futurama.
It is a computer generated depiction of an area that his awareness can enter. This allows him to interact with computer systems in a much more direct manner.

. . . I just had an interesting possible addition to make:
"This has the side effect of allowing him to enter computer generated worlds like Second Life, SIMS, World of Warcraft and others."
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So... it's kind of like an interface tool that allows him to interact with unsecured digital systems more easily? And for your addition, would he be in those worlds the same way as a regular player would be (i.e. playing the game normally, except he controls his character and experiences the world in VR), or would he be more like a foreign entity not part of the system/world?
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"playing the game normally, except he controls his character and experiences the world in VR"
Yes, that is it
The Foriegn entity path would have to deal with problems like anti-malware software, crashing the server he is on, and much more.
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Okay, please add it to the profile for final review.
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Done
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Sophia
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Please fix the BBcode real quick, there's a typo in the closing spoiler and it kind of made things messy.
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Fixed. Sorry about that.
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Corruption
Jan 29 2017, 02:33 PM
Powers and Abilities:
Blessings of Yuntak:


Broken Power Armor:

Equipment:
Yuntak's amulet
Power Armor
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